Random Okh Art.

[Okhu]

I know I know...Okh can draw.....I'm suprised too...don't worry about the ..random memo paper I stole from motels..that will go away when I decide I'm good enough to waste my time on the good paper I have in my sketch book...ANYWAYS...here mai first TNG Arts.... I drew Okh :X....kind of crappy I know..but...meh..haven't really drawn anything since 5th grade ;-;



http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/Okh.jpg

oooo ahh?

[Bir]

Good start, but needs more perportion. Now where are these elves?

[Okhu]

They are somewhere.

And I know she needs more proportion..its my first actual piccy I drew in like..13 years.... << I was more worried about the face looking bad then the actual body. I'm generally terrible at faces.

[Bir]

If it makes you feel better, her hand looks better than most hands I draw/cleverly cover up so I don't have to draw.

[Okhu]

Heres how far I've gotten on the elf.

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/Elfart1.jpg

[Daala]

I really like the style! I get a sort of sexy Latina feel from it..

You told me on MSN you wanted criticism. The only thing that jumps out to me is that her left arm sort of tapers off, and gets smaller and smaller.

[Okhu]

Only way to get better is with Critcism...will fix that. :x

[Daala]

I'm curious about the elf.^^ The way her face is positioned, slightly, very slightly, tilted forward, I could see either a challenging, imperious gaze, or a sort of assertive playfulness.

[Okhu]

Its a man....HA

[Bir]

Oo elf, is it Bir is it Bir?

[Okhu]

Elf is a random elf mage I made yesterday.. :0

[Daala]

Its a man....HA

:P I know your proclivity to female characters, so even though I thought it was a man, I ignored my instinct.

[Bir]

Ooo you got told. ;P

[Okhu]

We'll see if I get to finishing the picture..I have a tendancy to just stop in the middle of things because I forget what I'm doing...

[Ninorra]

Alrighty Okhu!

First thing that I would suggest doing is working on proportions. Her head is too big for her body, which you can easilly fix next time. Her cleavage is a bit too high, considering the size of her boobs. What I usually do is draw the boobs themselves, and the parts that touch end up being the "cleavage line".

[Okhu]

Her head WAS a bit more proportionate until the Scanner made her all Kawaii huge anime head...... and yeah I'm still bad with proportions and shading and stuff....I'll get better. - What did you think of the rough of the elf - sofar.

[Sinthe]

I'd hardly call the Jordan Grand a motel. I stayed there when I went to Sunday River last year, it's rather... nice and expensive.


But yeah, despite that, nifty.

Proportions have -always- been my downside, so I'll leave the critisism to others on that subject.

[Okhu]

New picture I was working on last night......

Okhus lips..... Mmmmmm now if only I could draw the rest of her as good. xD

Program used - openCanvas


http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/Orc.jpg

[Bir]

SHOOP DA WOOP?

[Okhu]

Bahaha Chocolaaaate RAAAAAAAAIN

[Okhu]

Started this at 6 in the morning. Apparently I get into an artistic mood early on... I WILL be attempting to finish this over the next few days...so stay turned....

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/RandomOrc.jpg

[Okhu]

And an update!....It went from the previous picture to something new!...woo!>..

I thinned down her face quite a bit and changed the eyes so they weren't AS anime-ish.

Still deciding whether she's going to be one of them cute bald orc lasses or one with hair....

we'll see. I might make one of her with and without...just to test. Feel free to criticize creatively as you see fit during the posting..it will help me with the finished work.


http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/RandomOrc-1.jpg

[Okhu]

Another Update.

I think that will be it for right now til I get home from work tonight. So feel free to leave lots of messages.

Just a few notes before I go :

- I will be adding some detail ( earrings ect )
- I did this ALL with just my mouse. ( No tablet yet. )
- Haven't decided on hair or not yet...I could get a vote..that'd be nice.


Anyway..

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/RandomOrc-2.jpg

There ya go.

[Okhu]

Okay I lied...I fixed her lips because it looked like she got friggin punched in the mouth.

Bam - Updated

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/Orc-1.jpg

Now she has sexy orc lips...enjoy ('W')

[Bir]

rofl, I always loved your choice of wording. Finish it, it's cute!

[Okhu]

Was that positive feedback?!..zomg? :o /woo!

[Bir]

Yes, it's positive feedback, keep at it!

[Ryoku]

It's very nice. I like it.

I don't know if that means anything coming from the kid who's 8th grade art teacher kicked him out of the class within 2 weeks because she claimed that "Stick figures are not art." The hell is that, anyways? I spent a whole 2 hours in microsoft paint on that!

Needless to say, in the 3 years since I got kicked out of that class, I havent make much improvement in my artwork... Except for Microsoft Paint stick figures. I can make me a MEAN microsoft paint stick figure.

But seriously, it's a nice little sketch. You must finish.

[Redemptio]

i wanna see more! and Bir were is mine *QQs*

[Ryoku]

Bir should make me one too. His suggestively homosexual pieces are quite good... Amoung other... Pieces.

[Okhu]

And here is finale....(possibly)

The question now is. -- Hair or no. And what style if you want one?.....yes I know the body looks terrible. The body wasn't the focus on this sketch, the head / face was....so meh...

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/Orc-2.jpg

[Eladis]

Pink ears? O.o

[Okhu]

The inside of the ear...nub.

[Okhu]

Unless its suppose to be green or something....-goes to check and fix-

[Okhu]

I'm so used to drawing animals.. -- *fixes*

[Bir]

lol <3 Well I still like it, her lil tusk is cute.

[Okhu]

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/Orc-3.jpg


Fixed because Bir don't lioke pink ears <<

[Bir]

I like it, now where is her hair? :D


She needs a ponytail mohawk.

[Okhu]

Mm nom nom nom...furry-sona...like thing. -- Pink ear insides....since you know....flesh is pink under fur

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/spacewaste2003/Batcow.jpg

[Bir]

XD It's cute. I don't condone furries though, seriously.