Illiyana's Commission

[Yatokth]

http://icerune.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Illiyana-99560828

Like it? Love it? Hate it? Hate me? Whatever your comment/critique/flame, post away! :D

EDIT: Oh yeah, it's of Illiyana. :D

[Izrail]

Excellent detail on the armor, it's eye-catching. As for critique, I'm no artist, but that leg looks awkward.

[opalexian]

h8!

...not really. That's pretty creepy and has a comic book quality to it. I like. :D

[Yatokth]

Excellent detail on the armor, it's eye-catching. As for critique, I'm no artist, but that leg looks awkward.

Thank ye! That's actually something I struggle with alot (good detail that doesn't suck balls) so I'm glad I nailed it.

Yeah the leg is... strange. Took me awhile to get it to look THAT good even. You get used to it if you look at the pic long enough? :3


h8!

...not really. That's pretty creepy and has a comic book quality to it. I like. :D

That's good, since that's what my whole style is sort of going for. XP

[Bir]

Just switch the way the legs are crossed and it would be fine.

[Taknar]

It doesn't look enough like Taknar.

Otherwise, it looks pretty cool! If I could remember my DA password right now I'd add you to my watcher thingy.

[Illi]

oh hai it's me =P

[Akuje]

Imagine the fun you'd have if you had a girl with double jointed hips like that.. :gets lost in thought:

Other then that, top notch :bigthumb: Bir had it right to help fix the legs, have the left leg cross behind..

[Yatokth]

Imagine the fun you'd have if you had a girl with double jointed hips like that.. :gets lost in thought:

Other then that, top notch :bigthumb: Bir had it right to help fix the legs, have the left leg cross behind..

Decent idea, only it would change which leg she's standing on and muck it all up - plus I'd have to retone.

I'm done with the picture anyway - but I'll keep that in mind in the future! I appreciate critiques. :3

[Broxigan]

Just switch the way the legs are crossed and it would be fine.

This.

Other than that it looks amazing! I love the dot pattern/comic style [Morei? Moraei? Moreai? Whatever it is called. I can't spell it. I know what it is, I work in the newspaper industry...I just can't think of how to spell it. XD]

[Bir]

Damn, I read my comment and realized how rude it kinda sounded. It's good anyways! Don't get me wrong! Sheesh, someone should tell me I come off as a bitch sometimes. I don't do anatomy good either so /shrug

[Yatokth]

Damn, I read my comment and realized how rude it kinda sounded. It's good anyways! Don't get me wrong! Sheesh, someone should tell me I come off as a bitch sometimes. I don't do anatomy good either so /shrug

Worry not!

I don't take offense to criticisms of my art - I love it. :3

EDIT: 600th post - YAT IS EXALTED WITH TNG WOO

[Jeedup]

Very nice, I especially enjoy the old style 90's inking, those blots of dots give me memories of Christmas morning getting a batch of old comics from my brothers in my stockings.

Then noogies afterwards.

Good times, good times.

Anyways! As Bir did mention, the leg is alittle wonky looking. Drawn well to be sure, but the way its laid out, and the fact you can see the bottom of her foot, yet its resting on the other leg, sorta makes it look like shes popped her hip outta socket, and twisted her knee outta place. I mean, Rogues gotta be agile, but damn, that HAS to hurt! (Thats not ment to be harsh, trying to lighten it up with a joke!)

Again, very good job on the inking and layout, the use of those ink-dots was a nice touch. What program did you use? The attention to detail on her costume with the buckles, straps and rings is a nice touch too, and I like how you showed just a teeny-tiny bit of the sword from her other hand on the side. You'd be surprised how often I miss shit like that.

[Yatokth]

Very nice, I especially enjoy the old style 90's inking, those blots of dots give me memories of Christmas morning getting a batch of old comics from my brothers in my stockings.

Then noogies afterwards.

Good times, good times.

Anyways! As Bir did mention, the leg is alittle wonky looking. Drawn well to be sure, but the way its laid out, and the fact you can see the bottom of her foot, yet its resting on the other leg, sorta makes it look like shes popped her hip outta socket, and twisted her knee outta place. I mean, Rogues gotta be agile, but damn, that HAS to hurt! (Thats not ment to be harsh, trying to lighten it up with a joke!)

Again, very good job on the inking and layout, the use of those ink-dots was a nice touch. What program did you use? The attention to detail on her costume with the buckles, straps and rings is a nice touch too, and I like how you showed just a teeny-tiny bit of the sword from her other hand on the side. You'd be surprised how often I miss shit like that.

Thanks alot for the critique/comment! :D (REMEMBER CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL)

The program I use is Manga Studio EX 3.0 - it's a comic making program, but it has a library of a fuckton of tones (apparently ink dots?) that I use. Very cool - I use the same things in my comics.

Hehe, don't worry about me not getting a joke, I'm usually pretty discerning when it comes to that (not bragging, I just am. x.x) - But yeah, the leg does look weird. I suppose turning the foot around would have helped now that I envision it. Oh well. Just something to keep in mind next time then! :D

I'm usually bad about detail - so I appreciate that! Yeah, I miss the little things like the sword alot too, I just laid this picture out in such a way that i couldn't. D: